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Love deep down, in your eyes that sleep
Is love not wrong? then why do you escape it?, why do you crave it?
When and where will you save it? And only once not waste it?
Should you have known so long ago? that you can't see unless you know, unless it's love that you can see, your eyes are closed through dark at night, although the windows, remains so tightly shut, and will you stand and stare out at the world? Without your love, without your world, the girl that stares right in your eyes, with lies yet truth in eyes that cried, that died, that dried, that came to you, to you,
Why oh how could we not see? that we might end in tears that bleed,
Where will we turn to next? On the road to save my soul, yet all I feel is less, so this,
my wish I wait to see, a star that shines it's love on me, the candle with rose that's dead, with every word the couple said, in death my love tonight the meal, a meal the tastes just like a kiss, a kiss that comes in such an innocents,
When I can miss no more, I miss what I adore.
©2004-2009 ~PhoeNix-iGnitioN
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:iconflutter-of-wings:
wow this really struck a nerve for me! it just flows so amazingly well! wonderful job :heart:

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"I really just want to be warm yellow light that pours over everyone I love"
:iconyank33s-p1nk-fr13nd:
Wow. That was utterly... fantastic. Just... Fantastic. Well done. (:

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"This one time, at Christian Camp.... I woke up to this guy saying, "I'm naked!" And since I was lying on my back, immediately my hands went... well, you know where...." ~Andrew

"Where?" ~Tony

"....*hysterical laughing*" ~Andrew, Jennifer and I
:iconnutboatsfelix:
Wow. That poem...I really, truly, honestly LOVE it! It's great! There's so much to love. The message. The way it's written. It's great! Absolutely awesome!!!

-Felix

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I'm the coolest person you'll never know.
:iconphoenix-ignition:
thankyou so very very much, <3
:iconnutboatsfelix:
You are so very welcome.
-Felix

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I'm the coolest person you'll never know.
:iconsuicidelove16:
Wow. I have chills reading this. Very nicely put together and very deep. Its full of alot of emotion and I like that. Its sad but true for me, nice work
:iconphoenix-ignition:
thankyou lady.. kiss kiss kiss

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